Thursday, December 3, 2009

The Courage to Write

It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles, or where the doer of deeds could have done them better. The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood, who strives valiantly; who errs and comes short again and again; because there is not effort without error and shortcomings; but who does actually strive to do the deed; who knows the great enthusiasm, the great devotion, who spends himself in a worthy cause, who at the best knows in the end the triumph of high achievement and who at the worst, if he fails, at least he fails while daring greatly. So that his place shall never be with those cold and timid souls who know neither victory nor defeat.”


Theodore Roosevelt

Monday, September 28, 2009

Who we are.......

Members of a graduate level writing class, taught by Dr. Fred Tarpley during the spring o f 2009 at Texas A&M University-Commerce, chose to continue their growth in the field of writing. They formed the Silver Leo Writing Club. The goal is to edit their own works at monthly meetings. Members present both prose and poetry for copyediting and developmental editing.



The club meets at 1:00 p.m., each month at the Alumni building on the TAMU-C campus. Meeting dates vary according to editing need but are usually the second Tuesday. New members are welcome.

Monday, September 21, 2009

Copyediting

Copyediting: A Touch of CMS Style


One of the drums that we hit constantly around Wheatmark is the "you need professional editing" tom.

Wheatmark offers several different levels of editing for authors. We also have an editorial analysis that will determine what level of editing you really need.

The differences between the editing options can be confusing. In order to better understand them, let's use a high-end department store as a parallel.

Developmental Editing

The most in-depth level of editing is the developmental edit. Think of the developmental edit as a personal shopper service some department stores offer. The client hires the personal shopper-who keeps track of every season's best looks-to provide incredible personal service and say, this is what looks good on you and here is your size.



A developmental edit does the same thing. During the developmental edit, a content editor makes comments and suggestions to help the author develop the content of their manuscript. Not a light undertaking, the developmental edit requires several passes, revisions by the author, more content editing, and finally one last copy edit before it goes to layout.

Heavy Copyediting

The next most in-depth level of editing is the heavy copy edit. The heavy copy edit is like a swanky shoe department. It turns a keen eye to organization, sentence structure, grammar, spelling, punctuation, and a myriad of other style issues. Like the shoe department, there are a lot of styles to look at and the salespeople in the shoe department know their inventory the best. They also can suggest fashions that will look good with your footwear choices and make recommendations about which shoes you might prefer based on your current wardrobe.

That level of attention is what you get with the heavy copy edit: gold star service that doesn't try to restyle you from the ground up, but instead offers you ways to enhance your story.

Medium Copyediting

This is the straightforward copy edit. An editor will check your grammar, spelling, punctuation, and style, and occasionally make adjustments to your sentences. This is like shopping in the men's or women's activewear departments. Mostly you get attentive salespeople who will help you find colors and sizes, but don't get too involved with your personal wardrobe selections.

A medium copy edit will not include in-depth commentary and suggestions. An editor might provide a few comments here and there, but overall they will be putting the final polish on your manuscript without interfering with your story ideas. Just like clothing salespeople, they won't talk you out of the hideous silk-blend golf shirt with puppies on it that you are buying as a Father's Day present. They'll just help you find your dad's size.

Light Copyediting

The last level of copyediting to talk about today is the light copy edit. For starters, light copyediting is only available to manuscripts that have been designated acceptable for that service through the Editorial Analysis. In terms of detail, the light copy edit is akin to shopping on the department store's website-you get mostly the same items as in the store, but because you don't need as much attention, you can easily buy online. The light copy edit offers all the same services as the regular copy edit, but the work will not be as extensive because your manuscript is fairly clean.

Friday, September 18, 2009

A New Deal!

Dear Silver Leo Members:

During my zealous efforts to improve the Silver Leo blog, I lost all of the past comments. While that is no biggie, it occurred to me that we/I did not choose the best approach to using this tool. Let's blow off the comment business and write posts to communicate. They are much easier to edit and delete. After a while, we can clean house of the old ones and keep the current ones. So bloggers, please send a message to the blog by posting rather than commenting.



Thanks and have a good harvest.


Earl